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medi evil fairy
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 Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 1:23 pm Post subject: One betrayal && His promises fail |
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One more tear and a broken heart
A dingy Boudwa and a dressed up tart
Short skirts. Tight tops and high heels
Something to do, to forget how he feels
Inserted inside, with a million quick thrusts
She ruined him, no body to trust
[Screamo]
And now he's living this nightmare
And she doesn't care
That smile she gave him, he got too attached
Of all the hatred and the jelousy that latched
And now he walks away
Too destroyed to stay
[Fades out]
But she still laughs at him
Just hoping he'll come crawling
She has nothing to give him
And now his hopes are falling
Why did she do this? Left a hole in the air
Ripped and scremed betrayal creates this dispair
[Shouts]
And now she's still laughing
Still laughing
Because she doesn't care!
No.No..No.No.No.She doesn't care!
[Back to normal]
A public house to drown his sorrows
Thinking of all those new tomorrows
One pint and another...The pain it begins to fade
This heartbrake's her parade.
[Chorus]
[Screamo]
And now he's living this nightmare
And she doesn't care
That smile she gave him, he got too attached
Of all the hatred and the jelousy that latched
And now he walks away
Too destroyed to stay
[Shouting; Heavier drumming]
Oh and how she laughs.
How she laughs!
And she doesn't care...So now he's not there
Stuck inside that boudwa
Unfastening that tarts bra...
A bit different than my usual stuff- tell me what you think...Please?
I think that's one i'm not gonna show Mrs Smith Lol!
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Better than your usual stuff.
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x.sweetsorrow.x
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| Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 11:27 am Post subject: |
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benji says lol
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Yeah it is kinda better than your usual stuff to be honest =/
that sounds mean. but it is. |
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x.sweetsorrow.x
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I don't know...Mr nolan would be like: OMG! That's gona be a blues piece!
Rofl.
But i think all your stuff is good
=]
but yeah this is good too
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x.Amber.x
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Who cares if it sounds mean.
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medi evil fairy
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| Posted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 8:17 pm Post subject: |
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ever get the feeling you're just never good enough for some people. I personally don't like it. It's not my style, i prefer the soppy stuff lol.
It doesn't sound mean, it sounds honest && Honesty rules. So thank you for your oppinion, && Some people mgiht care if it sounds mean. Because telling somebody they are useless even if its true would be mean.
&& Blah...
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Nobody called you useless, fool.
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Sounds. Not was.
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| Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 9:14 pm Post subject: One betrayal His promises fail |
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"He Is My only One"
He is the only one in my life
He is the one I love
He is the one for me
He is the one I want
He is the one I kiss good night
He is the only one that cares for me
He is the only one I dream of at night
He is the only lover I have
He is the sweetest one there is
He is the greatest I have known
He is my life
He is me salvation
He is the one I will spend my life with
He is the love of my life
When you love some one you share
Everything you got with that one
You have to give him all your love
You have to give him you heart
Thats is really love
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