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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 8:32 pm    Post subject: start of my novel Reply with quote

Don't ask me what it's about, you'll see soon enough Razz



It's a bit different from my usual stuff, I thought I'd approach the plot from a different angle.


The window winked a reflective ray of light over the grey carpet covered floor, and the yellow wallpaper smirked it's essence around the room. The room itself screamed it's disgusting decour all through the closeted room, making the teenage girl feel repelled and slightly chlosterophobic. The people standing behind the two-way mirror didn't seem to notice the look of repulsion on the girls face, or care about the squirming of uncomfortability as the girl shifted in her hard back kitchen table type chair.

Behind the two way mirror stood five people, their age not defiable, and their looks masked by the green eye masks they were all wearing. A red blob was on each one of the beings nose, it resembled a clown nose, and matched their mouth mask, which was white and looked like what you'd expecta surgeon to wear. Their gender was unrecognizable, each one of the people had long hair, and each one had it tied to the of their heads. As for their bodies, it would seem less frightening to not mention them.
"How old's this one?" Asked one of the smaller ones.
"From what I could gather from her hardrive, she's atleast 16 years old, and no older than 18 years old." Replied the tallest in the room.
"And from what Continent is she from?" The other questioned as the three not speaking left the room, the door slamming shut.
"68.79.26.91"
"That's strange, no one from that area has ever defied the laws before. Any idea why she would?"
"Not a clue, they're examining her memory as we speak, to try an discover why she'd break the rules."
"OH right, " The other muttered, blinking it's heavy lidded eyes as it thought of who 'they' actually are.
"Are there any more questions?"
"Has any one noticed her missing yet?"
"No one important, she only had a family, a boyfriend, and about four hundred friends, we can manage to decrease their memory size so they'll forget she ever existed."
"And her past?"
"Oh, that's being dealed with as we speak."
"There's no way she can break out?"
"We concealed all rooms even more firmly, since Case 559. We are positive there is no way of accidental release."
A loud fizzing noise echoed around the viewing room.
"M. M! M! M! M!" Shouted a voice. "Calling M! M! M! M! M! There is an URGENT meeting in the Conference area. Please use the Z-Whip to reach it faster! It is absolutely URGENT! I repeat..."
The remaining two left the room as the voice as the sound continued to sound on. "...M! There is an URGENT meeting in the Conference area. Please use the Z-Whip to reach it faster! It is absolutely URGENT! I -" At last the annoying noice was shut out by the closing of the soundproof door.


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PostPosted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 7:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's the kind of thing I could see Terry Pratchett doing Very Happy
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